Reflection & Change:
What stood out was adding a price to my pitch, so I did add that to the newest pitch. My customers need to know a price and what they are getting for it. I made sure to add what everything is included on the app and what you can get out of it. All of the feedback I was giving was very incite full and helpful. I didn't think any feed back was silly or wrong. I changed up the pitch a little bit, so it didn't feel as memorized as the second pitch did. I made sure to be just as enthusiastic if not more in this video. I became more comfortable in front of the camera, but I was sick when I made this video. My confidence was a bit low because of it, but I tried not to let my sickness get in the way.
Hi Shelby,
ReplyDeleteI think each time your pitch improves a lot. Adding a price to your pitch was a great addition this time and made it realistic for the customers that are interested. I think you fixed all the feedback that was given to you and you look a lot more comfortable, almost as if the pitch was memorized, which it probably almost is at this point. Good job!
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ReplyDeleteHi Shelby! You have really improved with each pitch assignment! You come across confident in this final pitch. I also really liked the inclusion of the price. I think reorganizing the outline of information in your pitch helped it as well. It seemed clearer and professional. You overcame being sick and were successful with this pitch!
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